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Millos Assailant
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 | | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:05 pm | |
| I couldn't agree more. Just wanted to learn exactly how his English was...and now I know  |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:13 pm | |
| yes loki, i know -.-;
but it wouldn't hurt to mention it, since it seems like they're using this proofreading as a way to learn more about the intricacies of the English language. and just cause we happen to be proofreading for manga, doesn't mean fixing other errors is some forbid taboo thing o.0 |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:11 am | |
| hehe.. well all of you are correct.. please don't fight.. bajuwa was correcting me because I insisted on any corrections |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:34 am | |
| they're not fighting, like hell they would do that. ^_^ |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:37 am | |
| oh lol, sorry sorry sorry, fighting was not my intent XDXD
sorry ^^; |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:10 am | |
| hEY WHAT DO YOU MEAN THERE WAS SOMETHING WRONG WITH EVERY SENTENCE ? I will have you know i am a very good typist /Lies XDD |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:09 am | |
| OK! I'm back as promised. What did I miss? |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:10 am | |
| hahah oh poor DK and is unfortunate writing skills xD
tho the fanfic looked really good, minus the grammatical side of things =P |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:12 am | |
| Ahmmm.. Did I do it correctly? |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:17 am | |
| I'll recheck part to now and I'll be re posting it to. So that it'll be easier to view |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:31 am | |
| I've done the re-checks and made some necessary corrections before re posting it back here. Please do correct anything I've done wrong. - Spoiler:
Page 1
Chapter 129: The last sun
the last hope of light..... Faded into the darkness of despair!
The overpowering Commander.... All follows his will!!
Kyle: What the sky turned dark all of a sudden.... It was shining just now....!!?
Fu: How can it be.....? Almost like he gathered all of the suns light...!?
Page 2
Fu: Kyle!!! It’s not turning into night, something’s blocking the sun!!
Page 3
Kyle: How can that be!!? You mean he can manage to control all the light in the sky!!!
Fu: (If the sun gets blocked, then the last trump card we’re holding on will be lost!) But we can't run away now...!? We have to fight.... if not we'll endanger Shao's team!!
Page 4
Uranus: Kuu....!! Huu....uuuh...!!
Grana: Just go now 03! There's no way you'll win against this pollution!
Uranus: Too bad, but my legs doesn't exist for running away...! Like I said don't take my battles away...!
Aiming with his gun for the last time.... Shoots....
Page 5
Uranus: Grana.... My purpose for living is to fight and win against you, but..... Sorry, I have to go now...
Grana: 03!!
Fu and Kyle braced for his attack....
Page 6
Fu: Kyle!!
Kyle: Ooh!!!
Kyle punched him.... followed by Federica...
Page 7
Uranus: ......This place's not bad... for a final resting place....!
Page 8
the duo looked up at the sky...
Page 9
Fu: Even if there's no sunlight.... we've got to fight...! We'll overcome anyone who dares approach!!!
Grana: 03 you.... You idiot...!!
Sunlight gathering....
Grana: Resistance! If you love the sunlight that much then I'll let you see it for the last time....
Fu: !!!
Page 10
Fu sent flying....
Page 11
Kyle: Federicaaaa!!!
Grana: This is the last light for you...
Page 12
Kyle: !!?
Kyle: The membrance is getting fixed...!!
Grana : (I can use Telekinesis to block the light, but that would mean I won’t be moving for the time being....)
Grana : (Junas!! Caprico!! I'm patching the membrance for the time being!) (Don't let the enemy get close to me until I'm done!!)
Page 13
(Shiner! Stop what ever is making Neuro Tower malfunction!) (And kill any manipulating mice there!)
Shiner : (Got it....I'm already on it) (Away from the Capital, the Tower with lowest
security!) (If they're attacking. They’ll choose to attack that!)
Kyle : Federicaaaa!!!
Page 14
From the opening door... the giant comes out....
Kyle : What's that!!!
Page 15
(Art: Monster coming out…)
Page 16
Junas : There's only seconds of sunlight and pollution density is
low - just attack them as you please ! But watch out for the place where Grana attacked, and stay away from there!
Caprica : Oh oh! Hoy! Nice, Go get them everyone!!!
Caprico : Done!!
Page 17
Kyle : Oh no!
From the space where it resembles the base...
Page 18
Delboro : Junas sama has started the attack, we'll support them Odo!!
Odo : Grana can't move, and Junas is weakening from the pollution, and Caprico has started to attack too - the stage is ready...
Page 19
Delboro punched Odo.... and the helmet broke....
Delboro : Who are you!?
Odo : Mochitsuki Oboro.
The lost friend.... Oboro, is here...!
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:32 am | |
| @Millo please do tell me, what do you think of my grammar? I'm really curious. ",) |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:38 am | |
| now you dun have to spam. -_-"
just edit your post there and wait till millo/ita see your work. gudluck! |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:59 am | |
| hehe. sorry bout that, my bad. I'm just excited but like you guys said. You guys don't need another proof reader what you guys need is a translator which is not me. But it's worth a shot to give it my all. I'll be back to see the results whether good or bad I still did it my best. ",) |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 6:15 am | |
| - Dark King wrote:
- hEY WHAT DO YOU MEAN THERE WAS SOMETHING WRONG WITH EVERY SENTENCE ? I will have you know i am a very good typist /Lies XDD
LMAO!! Dude, don't worry. I added more mistakes on the script on purpose.  @General: I commend you for trying your best on it. Don't know if it's enough to pass but...it's satisfactory to me. Some of the ones you changed were not correct, and others you missed. Keep fixing it, though, and post the final version here for itamaesan.  |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Thu Nov 18, 2010 7:44 pm | |
| Millos: ok then. Pm me if itamaesan is around. thanks  |
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:35 am | |
| here's part 2 correct me if i'm wrong - Spoiler:
Page 1
Chapter 129: The last sun
the last hope of light..... Faded into the darkness of despair!
The overpowering Commander.... All follows his will!!
Kyle: What the sky turned dark all of a sudden.... It was shining just now....!!?
Fu: How can it be.....? Almost like he gathered all of the suns light...!?
Page 2
Fu: Kyle!!! It’s not turning into night, something’s blocking the sun!!
Page 3
Kyle: How can that be!!? You mean he can manage to control all the light in the sky!!!
Fu: (If the sun gets blocked, then the last trump card we’re holding on will be lost!) But we can't run away now...!? We have to fight.... if not we'll endanger Shao's team!!
Page 4
Uranus: Kuu....!! Huu....uuuh...!!
Grana: Just go now 03! There's no way you'll win against this pollution!
Uranus: Too bad, but my legs doesn't exist for running away...! Like I said don't take my battles away...!
Aiming with his gun for the last time.... Shoots....
Page 5
Uranus: Grana.... My purpose for living is to fight and win against you, but..... Sorry, I have to go now...
Grana: 03!!
Fu and Kyle braced for his attack....
Page 6
Fu: Kyle!!
Kyle: Ooh!!!
Kyle punched him.... followed by Federica...
Page 7
Uranus: ......This place's not bad... for a final resting place....!
Page 8
the duo looked up at the sky...
Page 9
Fu: Even if there's no sunlight.... we've got to fight...! We'll overcome anyone who dares approach!!!
Grana: 03 you.... You idiot...!!
Sunlight gathering....
Grana: Resistance! If you love the sunlight that much then I'll let you see it for the last time....
Fu: !!!
Page 10
Fu sent flying....
Page 11
Kyle: Federicaaaa!!!
Grana: This is the last light for you...
Page 12
Kyle: !!?
Kyle: The membrance is getting fixed...!!
Grana : (I can use Telekinesis to block the light, but that would mean I won’t be moving for the time being....)
Grana : (Junas!! Caprico!! I'm patching the membrance for the time being!) (Don't let the enemy get close to me until I'm done!!)
Page 13
(Shiner! Stop what ever is making Neuro Tower malfunction!) (And kill any manipulating mice there!)
Shiner : (Got it....I'm already on it) (Away from the Capital, the Tower with lowest
security!) (If they're attacking. They’ll choose to attack that!)
Kyle : Federicaaaa!!!
Page 14
From the opening door... the giant comes out....
Kyle : What's that!!!
Page 15
(Art: Monster coming out…)
Page 16
Junas : There's only seconds of sunlight and pollution density is
low - just attack them as you please ! But watch out for the place where Grana attacked, and stay away from there!
Caprica : Oh oh! Hoy! Nice, Go get them everyone!!!
Caprico : Done!!
Page 17
Kyle : Oh no!
From the space where it resembles the base...
Page 18
Delboro : Junas sama has started the attack, we'll support them Odo!!
Odo : Grana can't move, and Junas is weakening from the pollution, and Caprico has started to attack too - the stage is ready...
Page 19
Delboro punched Odo.... and the helmet broke....
Delboro : Who are you!?
Odo : Mochitsuki Oboro.
The lost friend.... Oboro, is here...!
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| | Subject: Re: Applying for Proof Reader Sun Nov 21, 2010 11:35 am | |
| PM it to Millos since Ita is a bit busy with her new job  |
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