there...saved kiba's comp!!!
Anyhow,
page 1:
Overdenoised, everything seems a bit blurry to me (mostly background) and a teeny bit overleveled... (the guy's suit). Middle panel is awesome tho.
page 2: Not bad, dunno what happened but everything seems a bit too choppy. Oversharpened maybe? Dunno, it's not bad, far from that, but it's not right. Kiba might spot the problem easier than me on that one... I hate psyren.
page 3: That one is your worst...sorry. White is underleveled, overall page is overleveled/overburn. A bit blurry here and there. Gray is bad. You lose the hair line in the top left middle panel. Last panel is charred.
Overall:
Not bad for a first time. Your setting are right for the most part. You just need to fool around with the programs a bit more and find your own cleaning recipe! I don't recommend starting up with Psyren pages... psyren has some psycho ass grey to clean. I got a hard time with them. I dunno how kiba does it btw... anyhow. Try easier series like Naruto or my favourite one to practice: Fairy Tail. You can find the raws on Raw-distro.
Don't give up wolfie!!! Post your progress~