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| Hey dudes! Is it possible if you guys can give me a shot for this position? It's OK if it's no go.
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:18 am | |
| Well i won't mentor over your app but i can supply your test good luck Devil SomeOne from our QC team will be around soon ^_^ Here is the Raw to look at so you can get a feel for what is happening http://www.mediafire.com/?5ti7afsn0vut5v2- Spoiler:
Blazer Drive
25th BLAZE "hellfire"
Pg. 1
Incineration to all oppositions!!!
Pg. 2
Makiura - ...How could you've done this to me...?
I had even saved your life...Why...?
Sumiya - Saved my life?
What? Didn't you teach me this yourself?
Pg. 3
Loaner – Your wife’s hospital fee and surgery must've cost you a lot, huh?
Makino - Tch, nothing's left but worthless trashes.
Loaner - We too didn't want to do this to you, Sumiya-san,
But you failed to meet the deadline of your repayment...
Makino - Oh!
Found something good now~
Pg. 4
Great, a branded...watch for women.
Sumiya - No!! That's my mom's watch.
Don't take my mom's treasured watch!!!
Makino - ...'da hell?
Sumiya - Dad, but that's mom's memento.
Get it back, dad!!
DAD!!!
Pg. 5
Dad...
Dammit!!
Makino - Whoa, now! 'tis you guys' own fault, OK?
Sumiya - Ugh.
Makino - For borrowing our money, but didn't return it...
It's all because of your dad.
We don't care if 'tis your mom's memento or what.
All we care is whether we can change it to money.
Get it?...This is...
Pg. 6
what they call business.
But guess you're still too young to understand it. Haha.
Loaner – That’s it, Makino. We're taking that kid with us.
Pg. 7
Well then, we'll be taking your kid as said in our “contract”.
That’s what we’re here for from the very beginning.
Sumiya - [Contract!?]
Loaner - Kids around this age are getting popular recently, as well.
The supply just couldn't satisfy all the demands.
Makino - Hey, kid. Betcha wanna live in a big house with lots of spaces,
more than this small, empty room, eh?
Bye, then. We'll take good care of 'im.
Sumiya - What're you doing? Stop!!
Help me, dad!!
Help me!!
Pg. 8
Makino - Huh?
Sumiya's dad - Please wait!!!
I'll give you anything, but please, don't take away my son!!
Loaner - Alright.
Then, after you get your life insurance,
we're going to have you die.
Give us your insurance payout.
Should be an easy deal if it’s for your son, am I right?
Dad!!!
Pg. 9
Pg. 10
-- The politician, Chief Misawa's house --
Misawa - Welcome.
I've always wanted to talk to you
regarding the future of our country.
You must've felt some delicacy about working hard for this country, I presumed.
Pg. 11
If you want to blame anyone, then blame your dad and your own fate.
This is business. This is what makes the world goes around.
Pg. 12
Sumiya - Number 13, entering.
I highly thank you for choosing me.
Anything as you ordered,
my lord...
Makiura - "Lord", hm...
Warder Misawa
must've discipline you really well then...
Sumiya.
Sumiya – [How did he know my name?]
Makiura - Well, I'll ask you for one favor...
That is
Pg. 13
Kill your warder,
Misawa.
Sumiya - Eh!?
Makiura - You're the chosen one. I know you can do it.
This Enku will unleash the flame smothering deep inside your heart.
That person is best gone.
What do you need to hesitate?
You should've known this best, shouldn't you?
Pg. 14
I would like you to kill him.
I want to free you.
This is what I call a business.
Pg. 15
Sumiya - Like back then...
Pg. 16
this is what I call a business.
I already have my next dealing partner, now. That's why.
Pg. 17
-- Section III Guardian, inside the division --
Daichi - Seriously!? Then, you called all of us here today
because we’ve located the Quilin Realm's bases?
Melon - That's right. Everyone will break up into teams,
and strikes each and every one of their HQ and subdivisions.
Misora - It's easier to locate them than I thought.
Melon - You're all thrilled now, aren't you?
Guardian - Ye-Yes, ma'am.
Pg. 18
Daichi - [I really can feel the thrill.]
[We might finally be able to save Ginga.]
Alright, let's sneak into their HQ, now!!
Yuyuka - I want to go to the HQ, as well.
I'll be in the same team as you.
Kuroki - Ah, Daichi.
You'll be heading for their subdivision.
Yuyuka - Ah...Guess I want to go to the subdivision more, now.
Daichi – What the fuck, Kuroki!?
But Ginga is probably somewhere in their HQ!!
Pg. 19
Kuroki - The one they're after is you.
We can't let you wander off to them, like that.
So said the head~
[Where did that come from?]
Dog - Warf.
Daichi - When I was young, I saved the little Shiro from bullies.
Ginga praised me, saying that that's excellent.
Ginga risked his life to protect me, and saved me.
I know that he must've wanted someone to praise him, as well.
With my very own hands,
I'll certainly
Pg. 20
rescue him myself,
and won't let anyone complain about it.
Pg. 21
Melon - Fuh...
as you wish then.
But I'll whip you if you let them catch you.
I dare say, this will be...
our last battle with the Quilin Realm.
Pg. 22-23
That goes for all of you, too. I'll kill you if you ever drop dead, so be prepared for it.
Guardian - Guess we can't die in this, then.
We'll avenge for your old base.
Daichi - Alright!
Pg. 24
Sumiya - There you are.
But how did you unlock the pod...?
Pg. 25
Your memory...also have Daichi-kun in it with you.
Both of you are in the same age as you are now...
But I thought you two merely just met in your recent battle...
This shouldn't even be possible.
And...that picture book...!?
[Kaine, who exactly are you...?]
Pg. 26
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - The effect of putting on 2 Quilin Mystickers simultaneously just takes place?
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - I guess your memory is revert back too far now.
Pg. 27
Kaine...Your favorite toy
should be here soon.
If you don't quickly try out the third Quilin,
that toy will hate you, alright?
Kaine - Kya,
kya.
Pg. 28
Quilin Realm - How did you know our base?
Who are you guys!?
Guardian - We're from Section II Guardian Division,
the division that you just crushed.
Pg. 29
Quilin Realm - Don't you intervene while I'm enjoying my music!
If so,
then I'll avenge for Shuga-sama, right now.
Vent CDK
Guardian - Resist Mysticker,
Repel.
Pg. 30
Quilin Realm - He bounced them back?
Pg. 31
Damn, they just kept on coming.
Guardian - I'm not done yet.
Pg. 32
Repel.
Quilin Realm - Ngh.
That Mysticker can rebound anything?
Won't be good if I fight with all three of them.
I better use this repulsion force to dive into the sea and hide down there.
Pg. 33
I have an Oxygen Mysticker with me, too.
Farewell.
Guardian - Yeah.
Quilin Realm - GYA.
Guardian - Farewell.
Pg. 34
Nice one, Knob.
You too, Kagekyu.
OWWWWWW!!
[You seriously are just Kagekyu.]
Lo...Looks like this...is as far...as I can go...
Daichi...take care of the Quilin Realm...HQ for me...
Pg. 35
Daichi - [Dammit. We couldn't even see where the enemy is]
[or even fighting back at all...]
[Where exactly is he!!?]
Pg. 36
Quilin Realm - I can clear~ly see all of you,
from 1 km away, that is~
My Cyclops is both Supporting Type and Weapon Type. It's the Mysticker which integrates the eyes with the rifle.
You can't run away from me~
Let's not shoot at the heart and the head~
Pg. 37
Alright, one do-...
He's still standing!?
What the? Did I miss!!?
He's pointing this way!!?
Could they possibly...!!?
Pg. 38
Tenjik - Yeah, already know where you are.
Quilin Realm - What's this rat!!? When did it get here?
Tenjik - You're surprised at THAT?
Shouldn't you be more surprised that I'm talking!!?
We have all the info about you.
We already took picture of Daichi getting shot long before this.
[This is my communicator.]
All I need is to hold it in front of the scope.
Quilin Realm - Damn, so that's what it is!!?
Tenjik - You can see miles away, but can't see what's in front of you, huh?
Quilin Realm - Then you too are a Guardian!?
How did you know where I am!?
Pg. 39
My nose is peculiar, after all.
I can distinguish the unique smell emitted from activated Mystickers,
in 800 m distance, for the time being.
Quilin Realm - [I never knew that the Guardian also have this kind of rat!!]
[I didn't even notice his presence!!]
Tenjik - But I bet you'll be more surprised
to know that I'm a Blazer, too.
Quilin Realm - What!!!?
Tenjik - BLAST PLUS!!!
Pg. 40-41
??? - Who would've thought that the Quilin Realm's HQ is inside a dam?
Yuyuka - YAHOO
Pg. 42
Echo - YAHOO~~~
Kuroki - It's really huge.
Yuyuka - Wow. The sound got echoed as well!!
Tenjik - We did not come here to play around.
How disgraceful of you, Yuyuka-sama.
Misora - I was thinking of trying that too, though...
Yuyuka - What's wrong with that?
YAHOO~~
Pg. 43
Sumiya - Yahoo~
Pg. 44
It's rude to come in without any appointment, but I'll let that slide this time.
Let's talk about our business now, shall we?
I'll be waiting upstairs...
Daichi-kun.
Pg. 45
Daichi - No need for the wait.
This is our last battle. Let's settle it quick.
** The time for their decisive battle has come!! **
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:23 am | |
| Thanks bro! My raw + script supply is very limited, as you know. I really appreciate it.
Hey Devil'sChild68. Thanks for the application! I'll reply to your test once you reply.
Have fun at Muda! |
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:01 am | |
| redundant! haha i caught a flaw from milo!  |
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:38 pm | |
| hey! isn't this the test that helios guy did?
^___^
may i ask what their characters are like?
who is aggressive and whose not? |
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:26 am | |
| Try your best with the raws given. If there's ambiguity with a certain line because of personality, we'll take it into consideration when critiquing.
Thanks again! ^.^ |
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:09 pm | |
| OK then! ^____^ Thanks By the way... |
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| Finally I'm done! Read the script while going through the raw. Then re read it again for the second time found some errors corrected it and then read it again for the final time then posted it here took me 15 mins. tho. Hope I did a good job of correcting what I thought is wrong that needed correcting. ^____^ - Spoiler:
Blazer Drive
25th BLAZE "hellfire"
Pg. 1
Elimination of all oppositions!!!
Pg. 2
Makiura – Why have you done this to me?
I saved your life didn’t I? Why?
Sumiya’s Dad - Saved my life?
What? You’re the one who taught me this, right?
Pg. 3
Loaner – Your wife’s hospital fee and surgery must've cost you a lot, huh?
Makino - Tch, nothing's left but worthless trash.
Loaner - We didn't want to do this to you, Sumiya-san,
But you failed to meet the deadline of the payment of your debt...
Makino - Oh!
Found something good now~
Pg. 4
Great, a branded...watch for women.
Sumiya - No!! That's my mom's watch.
Don't take my mom's treasured watch!!!
Makino -'da hell?
Sumiya - Dad, but that's mom's memento.
Get it back, dad!!
DAD!!!
Pg. 5
Dad...
Dammit!!
Makino - Whoa, now! 'tis your own fault, OK?
Sumiya - Ugh.
Makino - For borrowing our money, but didn't repay it back...
It's all because of your dad.
We don't care if 'tis your mom's memento or what.
All we care is whether we can pawn for money.
Get it?...This is...
Pg. 6
what we call business.
But guess you're still too young to understand it. Haha.
Loaner – That’s it, Makino. We're taking that kid of yours along with us.
Pg. 7
Well then, we'll be taking your kid as said in our “contract”.
That’s what we came here for from the very beginning.
Sumiya - [Contract!?]
Loaner - Kids around this age are getting popular this days that our supply just couldn't satisfy all the demands.
Makino - Hey, kid. Betcha wanna live in a big house with lots of space
than this small, empty room, right?
Bye, then. We'll take good care of 'im.
Sumiya – Wait what're you doing? Where are you taking me? Stop!!
Help me, dad!!
Help me!!
Pg. 8
Makino - Huh?
Sumiya's dad - Please wait!!!
I'll give you anything, but please, don't take away my son!!
Loaner - Alright.
Then, after you get your life insurance,
we're going to wait until your dead. But…
Unless you give us your insurance payout.
Should be an easy deal if it’s for your son, right?
Dad!!!
Pg. 9
Pg. 10
-- The politician, Chief Misawa's house --
Misawa - Welcome.
I've always wanted to talk to you
regarding the future of this country.
You must've felt some delicacy about working hard for this country, I presumed.
Pg. 11
If you want to blame anyone, then blame your dad and your own fate.
This is business. This is what makes the world go around.
Pg. 12
Sumiya - Number 13, entering.
I thank you for choosing me.
Anything you want to ordered,
my lord?
Makiura - "Lord", hm...
Warder Misawa
must've disciplined you very well...
Sumiya.
Sumiya – [How did he know my name?]
Makiura - Well, May I ask you one favor...
That is to
Pg. 13
Kill your warder,
Misawa.
Sumiya - Eh!?
Makiura - You're the chosen one. I know you can do it.
This Enku will unleash the flame smothering deep inside your heart.
That person is best gone.
Why do you need to hesitate?
You should've known this, shouldn't you?
Pg. 14
I would like you to kill him.
I want to free you.
This is what I call a business.
Pg. 15
Sumiya - Like back then...
Pg. 16
this is what I call business.
I already have my next dealing partner. That's why.
Pg. 17
-- Section III Guardian, inside the division --
Daichi - Seriously!? Then, you called all of us here today
because we’ve located the Quilin Realm's bases?
Melon - That's right. Everyone will split up into teams,
and strike each and every one of their subdivisions.
Misora - It's easier to locate them than I thought.
Melon - You're all excited, aren't you?
Guardian - Ye-Yes, ma'am.
Pg. 18
Daichi - [I really can feel the thrill.]
[We might finally be able to save Ginga.]
Alright, let's sneak into their HQ, now!!
Yuyuka - I want to go to the HQ, as well.
I want to be in the same team as you.
Kuroki - Ah, Daichi.
You'll be heading for their subdivision.
Yuyuka - Ah...Guess I’ll be going to their subdivision too.
Daichi – What the fuck, Kuroki!?
But Ginga is probably somewhere in their HQ!!
Pg. 19
Kuroki - The one they're after is you.
We can't let you wander off.
So says the head~
[Where did that come from?]
Dog - Warf.
Daichi - When I was young, I saved the little Shiro from bullies.
Ginga praised me, saying that it was good.
Ginga risked his life to protect me, and save me.
I know that he must've wanted someone to praise him, as well.
With my own two hands,
I'll certainly
Pg. 20
rescue him myself,
and I won't let anyone stop me no matter what they say.
Pg. 21
Melon - Fuh...
as you wish then.
But I'll kick your ass if you let them catch you.
I say, this will be...
our last battle with the Quilin Realm.
Pg. 22-23
That goes for all of you, too. I'll kill you if you ever get caught, so be prepared for it.
Guardian - Guess we can't die then.
We'll avenge your old base.
Daichi - Alright!
Pg. 24
Sumiya - There you are.
But how did you unlock the pod...?
Pg. 25
Your memory... has Daichi-kun in it with you.
Both of you are of the same age as you are now...
But I thought you two just met in your recent battle...
This shouldn't have been even possible.
And...that picture book...!?
[Kaine, who exactly are you...?]
Pg. 26
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - The effect of putting on 2 Quilin Mystickers simultaneously just took place?
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - I guess your memory is reverted back too far now.
Pg. 27
Kaine...Your favorite toy
should be here soon.
If you don't quickly try out the third Quilin,
that toy will hate you, ok?
Kaine - Kya,
kya.
Pg. 28
Quilin Realm - How did you find our base?
Who are you guys!?
Guardian - We're from Section II Guardian Division,
the division that you just crushed.
Pg. 29
Quilin Realm - Don't you interrupt me while I'm enjoying my music!
If so,
then I'll avenge for Shuga-sama.
Vent CDK
Guardian - Resist Mysticker,
Repel.
Pg. 30
Quilin Realm - He repelled them?
Pg. 31
Damn, they just keep on coming.
Guardian - I'm not done yet.
Pg. 32
Repel.
Quilin Realm - Ngh.
That Mysticker can repel anything?
This isn’t good if I fight with all three of them.
I better use this repulsion force to dive into the sea and hide down there.
Pg. 33
I have an Oxygen Mysticker with me, too.
Farewell.
Guardian - Yeah.
Quilin Realm - GYA.
Guardian - Farewell.
Pg. 34
Nice one, Knob.
You too, Kagekyu.
OWWWWWW!!
[You seriously are just awesome Kagekyu.]
Lo...Looks like this...is as far...as I can go...
Daichi...take care of the Quilin Realm...HQ for me...
Pg. 35
Daichi - [Dammit. We couldn't even see where the enemy is]
[or even fight back...]
[Where exactly is he!!?]
Pg. 36
Quilin Realm - I can clear~ly see all of you,
from 1 km away, that is~
My Cyclops is both Support Type and Weapon Type. It's the Mysticker which integrates the eyes with the rifle.
You can't run away from me~
Let's not shoot at the heart and the head~
Pg. 37
Alright, one do-...
He's still standing!?
What the? Did I miss!!?
He's pointing this way!!?
Could they possibly...!!?
Pg. 38
Tenjik - Yeah, already know where you are.
Quilin Realm - What's this rat!!? When did it get here?
Tenjik - You're surprised at THAT?
Shouldn't you be more surprised that I'm talking!!?
We have all the info about you.
We already took a picture of Daichi getting shot long before this.
[This is my communicator.]
All I need is to hold it in front of the scope.
Quilin Realm - Damn, so that's what it is!!?
Tenjik - You can see miles away, but can't see what's in front of you, huh?
Quilin Realm - Then you are a Guardian!?
How did you know where I am!?
Pg. 39
My nose is peculiar, after all.
I can distinguish the unique smell emitted from activated Mystickers,
in 800 m distance, for the time being.
Quilin Realm - [I never knew that the Guardian also have this kind of rat!!]
[I didn't even notice his presence!!]
Tenjik - But I bet you'll be more surprised
to know that I'm a Blazer, too.
Quilin Realm - What!!!?
Tenjik - BLAST PLUS!!!
Pg. 40-41
??? - Who would've thought that the Quilin Realm's HQ is inside a dam?
Yuyuka - YAHOO
Pg. 42
Echo - YAHOO~~~
Kuroki - It's really huge.
Yuyuka - Wow. The sound got echoed as well!!
Tenjik - We did not come here to play around.
How disgraceful of you, Yuyuka-sama.
Misora - I was thinking of trying that too, though...
Yuyuka - What's wrong with that?
YAHOO~~
Pg. 43
Sumiya - Yahoo~
Pg. 44
It's rude to come in without any appointment, but I'll let that slide this time.
Let's talk about our business for now, shall we?
I'll be waiting upstairs...
Daichi-kun.
Pg. 45
Daichi - No need for the wait.
This is our last battle. Let's settle it quick.
** The time for their decisive battle has come!! **
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| | Subject: Re: [TESTING] Applying for proof reading Sat Dec 25, 2010 8:30 am | |
| Sorry Devil, with xmas and all, we have been more than busy with all the editing of our series (since most staffies wouldn't be round here those days). Since you are truly commited, I will make you a trainee and let Meg or Paul give their total approval when they come back, ok? ^^
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