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umeboshi110 Translator
Posts : 43 Points : 5419 Reputation : 0 Joined date : 2010-12-23 Age : 35 Location : in the IRC channel
| Subject: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 1:19 am | |
| My body is ready. Unfortunately I don't have much time to do much other stuff at Muda, but I guess I agree that I might as well try to get myself qualified.
...Right, so, I'm applying as a proofreader. Oh no, I don't like tests...
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:42 pm | |
| Lol...well, it's gotta be done XD Here is your test! - Spoiler:
A support vector machine or the “SVM” is supervise learning algorithm that been continued improved over the year. This algorithms helps to take account of general problem of be able to distinguished between positive and negative value of given class vectors of with multiple dimension. Example, if you had a series of expression level team measurement and datum for each of large quantities of player in continental confederation, SVM can learns answer question like, “Do given player belong to functional class Y?” where Y some classification or group such like “attacking players” or “right-wing recruits.” This would works best with “iris” data sit mention above. Also if have assortment of computered images of handwriting letters the SVN could say weather certain image is, let’s say the letters z.
Btw, just change the title to "Applying for xxxx"... Thanks! |
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umeboshi110 Translator
Posts : 43 Points : 5419 Reputation : 0 Joined date : 2010-12-23 Age : 35 Location : in the IRC channel
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:29 pm | |
| lol, I had no clue what this was talking about - Spoiler:
A support vector machine, or the “SVM,” is a supervised [can't be sure about this though, since I don't really know what it is, maybe I should look it up] learning algorithm that been continually improved over the past year [otherwise "over the years," also consider throughout instead of over]. This algorithms helps to take account of address the general problem of be able to distinguishing between positive and negative values of given class vectors of with in [again, not sure about the technical aspects] multiple dimensions. For example, if you had a series of expression-level team measurements and data for each of the large quantities of players in the continental confederations, [I may be wrong since I don't know what a continental confederation is] an SVM can learns be used to answer questions like, [I would say use such as here but in this case it feels slightly repetitive] “does a given player belong to functional class Y?” where Y is/represents some classification or group such like as “attacking players” or “right-wing recruits.” This would works best with the “iris” [I hope this refers to something not part of this test...] data sit set mentioned above. Also In addition, if you have an assortment of computered digital images of handwritten letters, the SVM could, for example, say determine whether a certain image is, let’s say the letters "Z."
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mourishin Cleaner
Posts : 556 Points : 7068 Reputation : 20 Joined date : 2010-11-24 Location : the tenth's side Awards :
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:41 pm | |
| this test looks a tad familiar to me XD good luck ume~ |
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umeboshi110 Translator
Posts : 43 Points : 5419 Reputation : 0 Joined date : 2010-12-23 Age : 35 Location : in the IRC channel
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 9:21 pm | |
| ugh, I already found a mistake that I didn't correct XD EDIT: I wonder if I'm allowed to fix it now... XD |
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HeiDenReX Cleaner
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| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:05 pm | |
| dun worry i won't tell milo. XD |
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Dark King Editor
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| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:48 am | |
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Millos Assailant Translator
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| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:07 am | |
| Don't worry about the technical aspects, ume. I'm just looking for proper grammar, flow...and that it makes sense (given no prior knowledge). I'm a little tired now so...I'll analyze it tomorrow. It looks good tho! I'm pretty sure you'll pass... Skimming through it I see only 3 mistakes. |
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:53 am | |
| @mourishin: You're right...that's because all my tests thus far have come from paragraphs of the same essay I had turned in for a class XD Ume...your results: - Spoiler:
A support vector machine, or the “SVM,” is a supervised learning algorithm that been continually improved over the past year. [“has been”; “continually” or “continuously”] This algorithm helps to address the general problem of distinguishing between positive and negative values of given class vectors in multiple dimensions. [Perfect!] For example, if you had a series of expression-level team measurements and data for each of the large quantities of players in the continental confederations, an SVM can be used to answer questions like “does a given player belong to functional class Y?” where Y is/represents some classification or group such as “attacking players” or “right-wing recruits.” [“does” to “Does”; “had” to “have” (tense parallelism…keep in present)] This would work best with the “iris” data set mentioned above. [“iris” to “Iris” (**forgivable, since you don't have to worry much about capitalization in scanlation] In addition, if you have an assortment of digital images of handwritten letters, the SVM could, for example, determine whether a certain image is the letters "Z.” [This time “have” is correct, but “could” isn’t lol; “could” to “can”; “letters” to “letter” (one letter here]; “the SVM” (before you said “an SVM” and here you put “the SVM”. They’re both right…but stick with one throughout ^^]
So in total, 6 errors out of like....a billion XD I took my time making it as horrible as possible and...you unraveled it quite astonishingly in my opinion. You, sir, get an A. Welcome, fellow QC'er. |
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itamaesan Muda Scantrad's Princess
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| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:52 am | |
| Lmao, ume. Good job and welcome to the world of proofing. XDDD |
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umeboshi110 Translator
Posts : 43 Points : 5419 Reputation : 0 Joined date : 2010-12-23 Age : 35 Location : in the IRC channel
| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:42 am | |
| haha, awesome! thanks guys~ yeah, that was a nightmare fumbling with all those color and strikethrough tags. Just sorting things and looking for where I was working on took quite some time. |
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Millos Assailant Translator
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| Subject: Re: proofreader app Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:02 pm | |
| Annnnnnnd it paid off. ^^ |
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