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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Prop wants to proof! Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:41 pm | |
| I probably lack the time for this, but I figure that I could help out more if I pass this. This will probably also help me with my english skills for my exams, so maybe it isn't entirely suicide Hit me up with the test please |
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:13 pm | |
| Ok Prop...here it is! Part 1! If you can pass this, I'll give you the second part of it. ^^ - Spoiler:
Decision Tree Algorithm
The Decision Tree algorithm help solve problem of classifying data into multiple group of datum. It provides innovative rule at solving large amounts of classifications assignment due to it worked on every type different of datum. Its well-suited for analyze abundant of amounts info, such as “Adult” data sit, cause it not does need load all data in system main memory all at same time. It uses a root system for remove burden the of the difficulty’s problem.
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:49 pm | |
| Well, here goes; - changes in red:
Decision Tree Algorithm
The Decision Tree Algorithm helps to solve the problem of classifying data into multiple groups of datum. It provides an innovative rule to solve large amounts of classification assignments due to it working on every different type of datum. It’s (It is) well-suited for analyzing abundant of amounts information, such as ‘adult’ data sit, because it not does need to load all of the data into the system main memory all at the same time. It uses a root system to remove the burden of the problem.
There was one word; "sit", that I didn't know if it was a technical term or not, so I left it. |
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Kiba Administrator
Posts : 2185 Points : 14437 Reputation : 327 Joined date : 2010-07-17 Location : Dunno... I'm lost :( Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:14 am | |
| - Propaghandi wrote:
- Well, here goes;
- changes in red:
Decision Tree Algorithm
The Decision Tree Algorithm helps to solve the problem of classifying data into multiple groups of datum. It provides an innovative rule to solve large amounts of classification assignments due to it working on every different type of datum. It’s (It is) well-suited for analyzing abundant of amounts information, such as ‘adult’ data sit, because it not does need to load all of the data into the system main memory all at the same time. It uses a root system to remove the burden of the problem.
There was one word; "sit", that I didn't know if it was a technical term or not, so I left it. Maybe I suck at english, but I found some extra mistakes (changes in green): - Spoiler:
Decision Tree Algorithm
The Decision Tree Algorithm helps solving the problem of classifying data into multiple groups of datum. It provides an innovative rule to solve large amounts of classification assignments due to its [not sure here >.<] working on every different type of datum. It’s (It is) well-suited for analyzing abundant amounts of information, such as ‘adult’ data sit, because it does not need to load all of the data into the system's main memory all [it already said "all" before, so why repeating? xD] at the same time. It uses a root system to remove the burden of the problem.
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:18 am | |
| :/
how did i miss that
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Kiba Administrator
Posts : 2185 Points : 14437 Reputation : 327 Joined date : 2010-07-17 Location : Dunno... I'm lost :( Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:23 am | |
| Haha, I guess you were just nervous. After all, Meg and Paul usually eat the heart of those who fail their tests and seal their souls in a bottomless void.
EDIT: Thinking about it, don't tell them what I have just said. They might eat my heart otherwise.
EDIT#2: Never mind T_T |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:47 am | |
| If i was NOT retarded, then it may have gone like this - Spoiler:
Decision Tree Algorithm
The Decision Tree Algorithm helps to solve the problem of classifying data into multiple groups of datum. It provides an innovative rule to solve large amounts of classification assignments, due to it working on every different type of datum. It’s (It is) well-suited for analyzing abundant amounts of information, such as ‘adult’ data sit, because it does not need to load all of the data into the system main memory at the same time. It uses a root system to remove the burden of this problem.
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:52 am | |
| Lol...gotta go with your original response here Prop, as you know. I appreciate you taking your time to do this ^^ ...AND KIBA STARTS PROOFING OUT OF NOWHEEERE!!!! XDD - Spoiler:
The Decision Tree Algorithm helps to solve the problem of classifying data into multiple groups of datum. [“to” is redundant; **since you’re using “data” as the singular form (which is fine) it must maintain throughout**; “datum” here is singular which would not go so “groups of data”] It provides an innovative rule to solve large amounts of classification assignments due to it working on every different type of datum. [Parallelism not followed here. Present tense with “provides” and present participle with “working” so you should say “works”, but since it doesn’t flow, you also need to change “due to”. In other words “because it works on”; Also, change “datum” to “data” because of **] It’s well-suited for analyzing abundant of amounts information, such as ‘adult’ data sit, because it not does need to load all of the data into the system main memory all at the same time. [“of amounts” to “amounts of” (if it was "amounts information" then it should be "abundancy of amounts information"); “such as the ‘Adult’ data set”; “not does” to “does not”; “all of the data” or “all the data” is fine; "system's main memory"; the two “all”’s is ok here too] It uses a root system to remove the burden of the problem. [Threw a curveball here. I'll forgive you. It should be “problem’s difficulty”]
So in total 10 mistakes I couldn't overlook, out of 30 total that I made... Don't know if I can pass you my friend. =/ I'll discuss this with ita and get back to you. |
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Kiba Administrator
Posts : 2185 Points : 14437 Reputation : 327 Joined date : 2010-07-17 Location : Dunno... I'm lost :( Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:48 am | |
| If I left 10 mistakes out of 30 then I am awesome :3 |
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HeiDenReX Cleaner
Posts : 1190 Points : 10303 Reputation : 31 Joined date : 2010-10-25 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:59 am | |
| meh, milo is just playing w/ you, of course he doesn't want you to feel bad about your bad english. |
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Kiba Administrator
Posts : 2185 Points : 14437 Reputation : 327 Joined date : 2010-07-17 Location : Dunno... I'm lost :( Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:21 pm | |
| /me kicks heid in the jaw. |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:07 pm | |
| I WANT ANOTHER GO
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:55 pm | |
| 2nd Try...Part 2: - Spoiler:
Advantage include simple computation cause of discreet kernel function, great accurate in classifying & quick judgments with a new instances. Only down-side I saw the lack of online learning vision, witch would requires a differing data train method. Such an tools should involved an easy to use implementing of the complicated system; so can it provides for simplistic learning.
Again...do your absolute best on this one. Last chance. ^^ Qasz: Millos failed at spoiler D: |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sat Mar 05, 2011 8:56 pm | |
| Ok, this is just about the best i think i can manage: I apologise for the lack of redness - Spoiler:
Advantages include simple computations due to discreet kernel functions, accurate classification, and quick judgments with new instances. The only disadvantage is the lack of online learning vision;[semicolon, because i joined 2 independant clauses] this would require a different data train method. [Tense change here, but i figured it was ok since it was a new sentence]Such a tool should involve a user-friendly implementation of the complicated system, so it could provide for simplistic learning.
please be right EDIT: if it's bad, i want to keep trying. Just so you know...~~ |
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:50 am | |
| My analysis of your results: - Spoiler:
Advantages include simple computations due to discreet kernel functions, accurate classification, and quick judgments with new instances. [Starting with “Advantages” sounds a little off. Start with “The” for flow; “discreet to “discrete” (I know this is based on context, but that’s how scripts are sometimes. “discreet” is mostly geared towards sentient beings, while “discrete” just means separate or distinct) Clue here: “functions”] The only disadvantage is the lack of online learning vision; this would require a different data train method. [The use of a semicolon is fine here, since it’s used correctly; “an online”; “vision” to “version” (**forgivable); “train” to “training” (same issue with context) Clue here: “learning”] Such a tool should involve a user-friendly implementation of the complicated system, so it could provide for simplistic learning. [“complicated” is good, but “complex” is better because it’s more objective (**forgivable); Nice catch on the verb tense here Prop, but why did you keep “could”? lol; “could” to “can”]
You pass... Great job Prop! ^^ |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:31 am | |
| ty!!!
lol, most of the mistakes were misunderstandings of context and the like...
I thought advantages was meant as the continuation of a previous paragraph, that had possibly detailed the system, and was now listing the advantages. I thought it was discreet because it was untracable or something. (i know nothing about software systems and design) I thought that vision was intended as like, the vision of the business concept. I thought 'data train' was a technical term, like a stream of data.
And the other two were, well, oversights.
Thank you sooooo much!!!! |
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:09 am | |
| Yeah I figured...that's why I forgived you on some of them. I'm not that bad XD |
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itamaesan Muda Scantrad's Princess
Posts : 2103 Points : 12574 Reputation : 436 Joined date : 2010-08-10 Age : 35 Location : Tennesse, USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:55 am | |
| Look at you, Prop-mastah. XDDD
Congratulations and apologies for this taking so long. (: |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:27 pm | |
| Hooray, thanks uber epic angel warrior princess lady!
so... what now? |
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Qasz Editor
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| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:41 pm | |
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Propaghandi Muda Scantrad's Artist
Posts : 183 Points : 5633 Reputation : 10 Joined date : 2011-01-10 Age : 31 Location : Australia Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:44 pm | |
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mourishin Cleaner
Posts : 556 Points : 7068 Reputation : 20 Joined date : 2010-11-24 Location : the tenth's side Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:12 pm | |
| lol cleaning is JUST LIKE proofing XD
i should know =p |
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Millos Assailant Translator
Posts : 402 Points : 6962 Reputation : 52 Joined date : 2010-11-08 Age : 36 Location : Miami - FL - USA Awards :
| Subject: Re: Prop wants to proof! Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:32 pm | |
| Sarcasm here...maybe...no? |
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