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 | | Subject: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:22 am | |
| men i want to help yah guys out. but after reading the other post for the job i think i am just a newbie compared to you guys..
i am currently a 2nd year marine engineering student of Northern Philippine Colleges For Maritime Science And Technology from the Philippines. i used to be a civil engineering student of Saint Louise University for 2 years but the course is not for me i think ^_^. I hope i can help yah guys out.
P.S. i got no experience but im willing to learn from you guys
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:27 am | |
| WELCOME TO MUDA SCANLATIONS! from philippines huh.? sana fluent ka sa english. :DD haha i'm from philippines either, i'm also a 2nd yr in college though i am a cleaner here, anyways wait till the others look after you, dunno the test for the PR tho.  gudlak sayo! tahaha |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:31 am | |
| oh. is that so. XD i think im fluent in english. i was raised speaking only in english but only since high school. XD. thanks.
good luck sa ating lahat. hhe
My Favorite mangas are:
1. Bleach
2. Air Gear
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:33 am | |
| ok wait for the pinky, he's the one to talk since he's the man.  again goodluck~ |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:37 am | |
| sure sure. why not. got nothing to do since ill be taking a break this semester. ^_^ |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:43 am | |
| Hello Helios and welcome to the forums since meg isn't around i will give you the tset *hope no one flames me for it* Just proof this script and we will see how you do Good luck - Spoiler:
Blazer Drive
25th BLAZE "hellfire"
Pg. 1
Incineration to all oppositions!!!
Pg. 2
Makiura - ...How could you've done this to me...?
I had even saved your life...Why...?
Sumiya - Saved my life?
What? Didn't you teach me this yourself?
Pg. 3
Loaner – Your wife’s hospital fee and surgery must've cost you a lot, huh?
Makino - Tch, nothing's left but worthless trashes.
Loaner - We too didn't want to do this to you, Sumiya-san,
But you failed to meet the deadline of your repayment...
Makino - Oh!
Found something good now~
Pg. 4
Great, a branded...watch for women.
Sumiya - No!! That's my mom's watch.
Don't take my mom's treasured watch!!!
Makino - ...'da hell?
Sumiya - Dad, but that's mom's memento.
Get it back, dad!!
DAD!!!
Pg. 5
Dad...
Dammit!!
Makino - Whoa, now! 'tis you guys' own fault, OK?
Sumiya - Ugh.
Makino - For borrowing our money, but didn't return it...
It's all because of your dad.
We don't care if 'tis your mom's memento or what.
All we care is whether we can change it to money.
Get it?...This is...
Pg. 6
what they call business.
But guess you're still too young to understand it. Haha.
Loaner – That’s it, Makino. We're taking that kid with us.
Pg. 7
Well then, we'll be taking your kid as said in our “contract”.
That’s what we’re here for from the very beginning.
Sumiya - [Contract!?]
Loaner - Kids around this age are getting popular recently, as well.
The supply just couldn't satisfy all the demands.
Makino - Hey, kid. Betcha wanna live in a big house with lots of spaces,
more than this small, empty room, eh?
Bye, then. We'll take good care of 'im.
Sumiya - What're you doing? Stop!!
Help me, dad!!
Help me!!
Pg. 8
Makino - Huh?
Sumiya's dad - Please wait!!!
I'll give you anything, but please, don't take away my son!!
Loaner - Alright.
Then, after you get your life insurance,
we're going to have you die.
Give us your insurance payout.
Should be an easy deal if it’s for your son, am I right?
Dad!!!
Pg. 9
Pg. 10
-- The politician, Chief Misawa's house --
Misawa - Welcome.
I've always wanted to talk to you
regarding the future of our country.
You must've felt some delicacy about working hard for this country, I presumed.
Pg. 11
If you want to blame anyone, then blame your dad and your own fate.
This is business. This is what makes the world goes around.
Pg. 12
Sumiya - Number 13, entering.
I highly thank you for choosing me.
Anything as you ordered,
my lord...
Makiura - "Lord", hm...
Warder Misawa
must've discipline you really well then...
Sumiya.
Sumiya – [How did he know my name?]
Makiura - Well, I'll ask you for one favor...
That is
Pg. 13
Kill your warder,
Misawa.
Sumiya - Eh!?
Makiura - You're the chosen one. I know you can do it.
This Enku will unleash the flame smothering deep inside your heart.
That person is best gone.
What do you need to hesitate?
You should've known this best, shouldn't you?
Pg. 14
I would like you to kill him.
I want to free you.
This is what I call a business.
Pg. 15
Sumiya - Like back then...
Pg. 16
this is what I call a business.
I already have my next dealing partner, now. That's why.
Pg. 17
-- Section III Guardian, inside the division --
Daichi - Seriously!? Then, you called all of us here today
because we’ve located the Quilin Realm's bases?
Melon - That's right. Everyone will break up into teams,
and strikes each and every one of their HQ and subdivisions.
Misora - It's easier to locate them than I thought.
Melon - You're all thrilled now, aren't you?
Guardian - Ye-Yes, ma'am.
Pg. 18
Daichi - [I really can feel the thrill.]
[We might finally be able to save Ginga.]
Alright, let's sneak into their HQ, now!!
Yuyuka - I want to go to the HQ, as well.
I'll be in the same team as you.
Kuroki - Ah, Daichi.
You'll be heading for their subdivision.
Yuyuka - Ah...Guess I want to go to the subdivision more, now.
Daichi – What the fuck, Kuroki!?
But Ginga is probably somewhere in their HQ!!
Pg. 19
Kuroki - The one they're after is you.
We can't let you wander off to them, like that.
So said the head~
[Where did that come from?]
Dog - Warf.
Daichi - When I was young, I saved the little Shiro from bullies.
Ginga praised me, saying that that's excellent.
Ginga risked his life to protect me, and saved me.
I know that he must've wanted someone to praise him, as well.
With my very own hands,
I'll certainly
Pg. 20
rescue him myself,
and won't let anyone complain about it.
Pg. 21
Melon - Fuh...
as you wish then.
But I'll whip you if you let them catch you.
I dare say, this will be...
our last battle with the Quilin Realm.
Pg. 22-23
That goes for all of you, too. I'll kill you if you ever drop dead, so be prepared for it.
Guardian - Guess we can't die in this, then.
We'll avenge for your old base.
Daichi - Alright!
Pg. 24
Sumiya - There you are.
But how did you unlock the pod...?
Pg. 25
Your memory...also have Daichi-kun in it with you.
Both of you are in the same age as you are now...
But I thought you two merely just met in your recent battle...
This shouldn't even be possible.
And...that picture book...!?
[Kaine, who exactly are you...?]
Pg. 26
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - The effect of putting on 2 Quilin Mystickers simultaneously just takes place?
Kaine - Ah.
Ah.
Sumiya - I guess your memory is revert back too far now.
Pg. 27
Kaine...Your favorite toy
should be here soon.
If you don't quickly try out the third Quilin,
that toy will hate you, alright?
Kaine - Kya,
kya.
Pg. 28
Quilin Realm - How did you know our base?
Who are you guys!?
Guardian - We're from Section II Guardian Division,
the division that you just crushed.
Pg. 29
Quilin Realm - Don't you intervene while I'm enjoying my music!
If so,
then I'll avenge for Shuga-sama, right now.
Vent CDK
Guardian - Resist Mysticker,
Repel.
Pg. 30
Quilin Realm - He bounced them back?
Pg. 31
Damn, they just kept on coming.
Guardian - I'm not done yet.
Pg. 32
Repel.
Quilin Realm - Ngh.
That Mysticker can rebound anything?
Won't be good if I fight with all three of them.
I better use this repulsion force to dive into the sea and hide down there.
Pg. 33
I have an Oxygen Mysticker with me, too.
Farewell.
Guardian - Yeah.
Quilin Realm - GYA.
Guardian - Farewell.
Pg. 34
Nice one, Knob.
You too, Kagekyu.
OWWWWWW!!
[You seriously are just Kagekyu.]
Lo...Looks like this...is as far...as I can go...
Daichi...take care of the Quilin Realm...HQ for me...
Pg. 35
Daichi - [Dammit. We couldn't even see where the enemy is]
[or even fighting back at all...]
[Where exactly is he!!?]
Pg. 36
Quilin Realm - I can clear~ly see all of you,
from 1 km away, that is~
My Cyclops is both Supporting Type and Weapon Type. It's the Mysticker which integrates the eyes with the rifle.
You can't run away from me~
Let's not shoot at the heart and the head~
Pg. 37
Alright, one do-...
He's still standing!?
What the? Did I miss!!?
He's pointing this way!!?
Could they possibly...!!?
Pg. 38
Tenjik - Yeah, already know where you are.
Quilin Realm - What's this rat!!? When did it get here?
Tenjik - You're surprised at THAT?
Shouldn't you be more surprised that I'm talking!!?
We have all the info about you.
We already took picture of Daichi getting shot long before this.
[This is my communicator.]
All I need is to hold it in front of the scope.
Quilin Realm - Damn, so that's what it is!!?
Tenjik - You can see miles away, but can't see what's in front of you, huh?
Quilin Realm - Then you too are a Guardian!?
How did you know where I am!?
Pg. 39
My nose is peculiar, after all.
I can distinguish the unique smell emitted from activated Mystickers,
in 800 m distance, for the time being.
Quilin Realm - [I never knew that the Guardian also have this kind of rat!!]
[I didn't even notice his presence!!]
Tenjik - But I bet you'll be more surprised
to know that I'm a Blazer, too.
Quilin Realm - What!!!?
Tenjik - BLAST PLUS!!!
Pg. 40-41
??? - Who would've thought that the Quilin Realm's HQ is inside a dam?
Yuyuka - YAHOO
Pg. 42
Echo - YAHOO~~~
Kuroki - It's really huge.
Yuyuka - Wow. The sound got echoed as well!!
Tenjik - We did not come here to play around.
How disgraceful of you, Yuyuka-sama.
Misora - I was thinking of trying that too, though...
Yuyuka - What's wrong with that?
YAHOO~~
Pg. 43
Sumiya - Yahoo~
Pg. 44
It's rude to come in without any appointment, but I'll let that slide this time.
Let's talk about our business now, shall we?
I'll be waiting upstairs...
Daichi-kun.
Pg. 45
Daichi - No need for the wait.
This is our last battle. Let's settle it quick.
** The time for their decisive battle has come!! **
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:19 am | |
| FLAME... there done.
Welcome to muda mate! Hope to work with ya soon, so good luck on your test! |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:20 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 9:29 am | |
| Charizard-> fire blast!!! |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:12 am | |
| - heidenrex wrote:
- ok wait for the pinky
Why is everyone calling me "pinky" naw "¬¬ This is your fault B! Anyway, welcome to Muda Helios ^^ You will have to wait for Itamaesan, our super-proofreader, to check up your application. In the meantime, you can do the test DK gave to you ^^ Hope to see you round!  |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:59 am | |
| Thanx for replying pinky^^ |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:09 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:33 am | |
| uhmm. may i ask a question?
should i just correct the part where it is wrong?
how do i copy and post?
how do i repost it?
sorry i ask a lot of question but i dont want to bring you guys down... i just want to make it correctly... ^_^v give me instructions and i will do it... |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:37 am | |
| For what you have to fix in there, ask Meg (Itamaesan). She is the Quality Check team leader By default, what proofers usually do is search for typos and/or sentences that are gramatically incorrect or don't sound too good in English ^^ For copy-post: well.... just copy your proofed script xD And then paste it here, in a response, putting it inside spoiler tags "[spoiler] [/*spoiler]" (whitout the * ) |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:25 pm | |
| What pinky says is true. Just read the script edit the incorrect grammar. If a sentence does not make sense don't be afraid to replace words so it makes more sense.
Step one: select and copy the text i posted.
Step Two : paste in a word editor such as microsoft word or notepad.
Step Three: Correct text
Step four: double check your corrections
Step five: Select an copy corrected Txt
Step six : Paste your corrected Txt here in a spoiler tag here in this thread
I hope that helps. Take your time Meg is the one who does this but she has yet to post here. I'm sure she will look over your corrections once you post them. |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:32 pm | |
| Hahaha, thanks for your help, everyone. Sorry I haven't posted here yet, I'm running around like a chicken with my head cut off trying to keep things in order. ^^;;
Helios, if you want to just go ahead and correct the script that was provided, that's fine. I'd usually give you the raws to go along with it - I find it helps to see what you're reading since it helps one get the grasp of what's happening more. But alas, we're still waiting on raws for that one, so I don't have anything to give you. ):
I wish you luck and I hope to hear back from you soon! (: |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:38 pm | |
| DK, only those with a good avatar OR ring can call me pinky! You don't fit in that selection!
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:39 pm | |
| PINKY PINKY PINKY PINKY PINKY oops i forgot xD |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:41 pm | |
| I will make you pink without the admin privileges :3 |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:45 pm | |
| Don't you dare I will rage like you have never seen XDD |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| Why was I the one made pink after that lol? |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:24 pm | |
| lol, i wanna see DK in pink =) |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:07 am | |
| well you missed it iwas then i abused my Mod powers check the ring thread |
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| | Subject: Re: Trying To apply for proof reading ^_^ Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:33 am | |
| - B-one wrote:
- Why was I the one made pink after that lol?
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