Hello~ So first, thank you for applying to muda~ I'm Robler, currently the only one which have "Redrawer" written under my avy (or nick, can't remember). That doesn't mean that i'm the only redrawer here though, it's just that most redrawer also know how to clean and than become an "editor". Actually most of them are far better at redrawing than I x(
About your pages:
1) The guttershadow is very nicley removed, however there is no need for you to remove the sfx's. Actually, i say that is's forbiden to remove those sfx's x) And the right one was also poorly redrawn.
2) So, this page was... acaptleble (however that's spelled ^^). My tip for you is to line up the pages next to eachother better so that they sync with eachother before you redraw (if you don't get what i mean feel free to ask. it feels like i'm saying random word anyhow...)
3) First: Why did you erease the pattern in the background? It's supposted to be there x) And now about the actuall redraw: In the left buble it seems like you have redrawn too much. Try to keep as much as the original art as possible. There are also some small details that could be fixed in that boubble. And the right boubble: All that you have to do in this one is to remove the text, no redrawing requierd ^^
(just realized that you deleted the boubbles as well, don't do that)
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